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Critical Analysis Peer Review and Instructor Feedback

 

 

The researched critical analysis required the most work from the students and was in fact the toughest one for me. There were many steps before I could finalize my paper, like learning how to cite the sources I use properly, summarizing a an article, and finally the annotated bibliography. An annotated bibliography required us to use outside information to support our research. I had to cite the sources and give a summary about it. All of the steps I had followed made it easier for me to write my research critical analysis. Although, I struggled with my research topic because I didn’t know how to connect it with the outside information I had gathered. In my first draft, my topic did not relate to to the information and was biased. For example, in my draft, I wrote that “parents are more likely to be seen at specialized high school games supporting their child because they are not ashamed.” It was a opinionated statement with no evidence to support it. Through the feedback I had received from my professor, which was to have evidence and a reasonable argument, I was able to improve my final paper.